One other learning outcome that I feel I improved on in this process was 1. “Demonstrate the ability to approach writing as a recursive process that requires substantial revision of drafts for content, organization, and clarity (global revision), as well as editing and proofreading (local revision).” I thought that doing global revision first allowed to focus on looking for areas to change in content and structure during the revision process. I was able to make adjustments to certain transitions and my naysayer paragraph by using this learning outcome. Also, it was easier for me to focus on local revision and picking out errors there, after the global revision was already done.