After comparing my first draft and final draft I was able to identify many more surface level revisions in my first draft. Some of the revisions included spelling, grammar, and punctuation. I also made a couple revisions regarding sentence structure and word choice.

I also did utilize global revision but not as much as surface level revision. For global revision I made edits to my thesis statement and where that was placed. I also used global revision to change up some parts of the structure of the essay.